Comparison with another blog

It's instantly recognisable that my blog lacks in detail and contents.

Comparing my blog to another student's blog, I am aware of what's needed for a top grade blog. There are many things that I haven't blogged and there is also a lack of anaylsis.

It's evident that what's included in the other students blog is no different to what is included mine. However, there is a lot more analysis; for example, they have explained why they have chosen particular shots. Whereas, I tend to simply list shots, etc. They also use images and videos to present their ideas clearly. This is particularly evident in their chosen props - in which photographs are used and the title font choice. Furthermore, it's quite clear that this blog is updated on a regular basis, thus showing a detailed progress throughout and including a lot of detail.

Therefore, from analysing another blog, I can see the contrast of quality to mine. I need to ensure that my blog is updated regularly and remember to include, not only more detail, but more progress. For example, our choice of font for the title etc.